by Ruben Etienne, Oct 11, 2008
After a break up there might be little left. Here's what's left of me.
Sometimes my dear I cannot stand you,
But there is no possible way I can stand without you,
I was a mere shell of a man until you blessed my life with your presence,
Every waking moment has been dedicated to your loveliness,
God must've had me in mind when he made you,
Innocently you raise my spirit whenever I am down,
I was half of the man you see now,
I would be none of the man if you were to go.
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